Nice images, and nice choice of subject. I especially like the one of the girl silhouetted looking up the tracks.
To improve, I would suggest being more experimental with your compositions. I see here that you’re relying on the same composition concept in a lot of these images: train tracks as leading lines moving into the distance. Definitely train stations suggest themselves to this composition, but how else can you show us train stations? What else can you find there to show us using other compositions.
Jason Tonio Woerner
June 3, 2011 at 1:52 pm
Nice images, and nice choice of subject. I especially like the one of the girl silhouetted looking up the tracks.
To improve, I would suggest being more experimental with your compositions. I see here that you’re relying on the same composition concept in a lot of these images: train tracks as leading lines moving into the distance. Definitely train stations suggest themselves to this composition, but how else can you show us train stations? What else can you find there to show us using other compositions.
Also, what’s with the motorcycle?
7/10